767: Healing Factor

9th May 2012, 8:36 AM in The Bodyguard
767: Healing Factor
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Dyonus 9th May 2012, 8:36 AM edit delete
I went through a couple of different punchlines for this one, but I like this one the best. The others were:

-Paul: Lauren! The new dog got blood on your floor!

-Paul: I liked it up until the part where you healed yourself.

Also wanted to mention her skin. I liked the idea of her being like a polar bear, so I made her skin dark under the fur. While I have shown her with patches of fur missing, I'm willing to just say that lightening of the skin is related to the disease she had and the dark skin is healthy for an Arctic Ambis.

Speaking of Arctic Ambis, while Atra is the same race as Maricax, Atra is from the north of their continent and Maricax is from the south.
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Andore Mordre 9th May 2012, 9:37 AM edit delete reply
Andore Mordre
Geez. That is NOT a trick I'd be showing off a lot. I think it has something to do with the pain, but I'm not sure.
gamerman14 13th May 2012, 5:16 PM edit delete reply
Wow, what a trick.
To bad I can't do that.
I'd try, but I don't think it would go over well. Also, you've got to wonder what Paul is thinking when he sees a strange ambis he's never seen before with a knife
chewie 4th Jan 2014, 2:07 AM edit delete reply
sure you can, -once- but i wouldn't recommend it
Otho Fernandes Damasceno 12th Feb 2013, 5:41 PM edit delete reply
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! The second proposed punchline is better than the canon one. Way darkly comedic, but pretty hilariously and in character with Paul! HAHAHAHAHA! ;)
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