968: Aranis the Caretaker 16: No Options

13th Mar 2015, 8:34 AM in Aranis the Caretaker
968: Aranis the Caretaker 16: No Options
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Dyonus 13th Mar 2015, 8:34 AM edit delete
Dyonus
Yeah, kinda pointless to pull someone out of an asylum to send them to prison.



So, before I figured out the order the last arc, this arc, and the next arc go in (since it's kind of a trilogy) this arc was by itself. Jix was, in the original plans (I hadn't actually written it at that point), one of the Ambis that goes off bounty hunting with Aranis. When the big reveal happens in the original version, Jix switches to Lamerix as soon as they enter the office.



I can't honestly say that would've been better, but I figured with Jix in the asylum, this was a good way to go with the story. The reason I didn't keep the original version is because I wasn't sure, when I was doing the planning, whether or not Remula gets completely cured. Placing it here and leaving the last arc open gave me more breathing room, which is why I wrote them as a trilogy.



The last arc of the trilogy has a conditional part of the story along the same lines, which is why it got lumped in with the first and second.
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man in black 13th Mar 2015, 7:01 PM edit delete reply
man in black
I think she is
CyberSkull 14th Mar 2015, 7:26 PM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
Its OK to admit you're scared of the crazy personality.
sir_chewie 18th Mar 2015, 8:21 PM edit delete reply
'the crazy personality' is a bit redundant. besides, is she really the scary one? I mean she hardly ever done anything. It was Jix and/or Lamerix taking on the 'baddies' like Kelelder and Marikax. It was 'The Ambis' (new name, please) who 'accidentally' poisoned mafia bosses. It's Lamerix using new devices on her roommate/caretaker just to see if. they. work. So is a spoiled b-word really all that scary?
CyberSkull 19th Mar 2015, 5:38 PM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
You're forgetting just how scary Remula was before Jix and the other personalities emerged to moderate her.
MrTTAO 16th Mar 2015, 1:40 PM edit delete reply
I, for one, welcome our ambis overlords
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