985. Terminate Her 16: Infirmary

10th Jul 2015, 6:41 AM in Terminate Her
985. Terminate Her 16: Infirmary
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Dyonus 10th Jul 2015, 6:41 AM edit delete
Dyonus
Originally, I pronounced "Atra" like "at-truh," but a little while back, I decided I liked "ought-truh" better...like the "on-tuh" pronunciation of "aunt."

One thing that's been bugging me about Atra is her snout. It was never supposed to be a full rectangular shape, but as time progressed, it just started becoming more so. So, I'm trying to bring it back to the way I had initially intended.

She's supposed to look different from Jix's race, but not that degree. Her ears are still supposed to look squarish, though.
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man in black 10th Jul 2015, 4:42 PM edit delete reply
man in black
He can go invisible
Vadelent 13th Jul 2015, 3:02 PM edit delete reply
Think of the "time stream" like a literal river. His "present" is downstream from her present so with his timetravel to her present he walked upstream and set a dam or something and gave the river a new path. In essense because he changed the path from the one he was on he never came to be there in there first place hence his current banishment from their reality.
sir_chewie 14th Jul 2015, 12:26 AM edit delete reply
here, it's like what was about to happen to Marty Mcfly in back to the future, where he discontinues after affecting the timeline. rather than as with Trunks in dragonball Z, where both old and new timeline still exist and one can travel between them. . . hey, is it too late to change the ending to this arc?
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